Tuesday, April 24, 2012
Fall of Darkness (Shore of Monsters sequel) Updated
I finished updating Fall of Darkness, with much more satisfying results. The antagonists' reason for existence makes much more sense, and offers some interesting contrast to the reader. Posted 4/24 on Amazon and Barnes&Noble. Smashwords and Createspace to follow soon.
Friday, April 13, 2012
Updating "Fall of Darkness"
I'm not as pleased with the sequel to The Shore of Monsters as I should be. There are some weak plot elements and abrupt pacing in parts.
So - I am re-working those portions. I am about half done, and am much happier with the results. I think the antagonists are much more realistic and compelling, and the plot more believable and connected to the first volume of the story.
The re-work should be completed and posted by the end of April.
So - I am re-working those portions. I am about half done, and am much happier with the results. I think the antagonists are much more realistic and compelling, and the plot more believable and connected to the first volume of the story.
The re-work should be completed and posted by the end of April.
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