Friday, April 13, 2012

Updating "Fall of Darkness"

I'm not as pleased with the sequel to The Shore of Monsters as I should be. There are some weak plot elements and abrupt pacing in parts.

So - I am re-working those portions. I am about half done, and am much happier with the results. I think the antagonists are much more realistic and compelling, and the plot more believable and connected to the first volume of the story.

The re-work should be completed and posted by the end of April.

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